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refactor(module-3): honest diagnostic framework - validated claims only, limitations explicit
CRITICAL HONESTY IMPROVEMENTS (following Modules 1-2 pattern): 1. RELATED WORK EXPANDED (Section 5) - Added 18 citations (9→27 total): - 5.1 Assumption Diagnostics (Stuart, Austin, Ho, Petersen, VanderWeele, Hainmueller) - 5.2 Federated Causal Inference (FACE, FLAME, FedCI, Duan, Chang) - 5.3 Adaptive Inference Methods (TMLE, meta-learners, quasi-oracle, Manski) - 5.4 Robustness and Sensitivity (Rosenbaum, VanderWeele, Cinelli, Carnegie) 2. THRESHOLD JUSTIFICATION HONEST (Section 2.1): - Changed: "Mode Selection Rules" → "Proposed Mode Selection Rules (Heuristic, Requiring Validation)" - Added honest caveat: "0.8 cutoff builds on established heuristics (SMD<0.1, tail mass<5%)" - Explicit: "Combination into overall scores lacks formal validation" - Stuart (2010): SMD<0.1 is 'rule of thumb' without power analysis - Requirements: "Controlled simulation studies with known ground truth violations" 3. PRIVACY CLAIMS DOWNGRADED (Section 3.5): - Changed: "0% covariate disclosure" → "Partial covariate privacy" - Added: "Information leakage caveat" - scores reveal data quality characteristics - Example: Unconf=0.70 suggests imbalance → indirect information - Honest: "Variable identity privacy is partial, not absolute" - Formal DP (Lap(Δ/ε)): "Future work" requiring utility-privacy calibration 4. NATURAL ACADEMIC PROSE: - Removed: "Key Observations:", "Key Findings:", "Key contributions:" - Converted numbered lists to flowing paragraphs - Changed from bullet points to "First... Second... Third..." structure 5. LIMITATIONS COMPLETELY REWRITTEN (Section 4.4): Before: 5 bullet points, defensive tone After: 6 detailed paragraphs with honest assessment: - Threshold calibration: "We do not know diagnostic power (sens/spec)" - Synthetic data: "Cannot establish diagnostic accuracy for real violations" - Ground truth missing: "Critical validation absent - controlled violation injection needed" - Information leakage: "Not quantified" - adversarial inference studies required - Three-site limitation: "Limited evidence for large network scalability" - Retrospective only: "Provides no guidance for prospective study design" 6. ABSTRACT REWRITTEN: - Removed: "complete covariate privacy", "explicit safeguards validated" - Changed to: "partial covariate privacy", "heuristic safeguards proposed" - Added: "Critical limitations: (1) thresholds lack calibration, (2) synthetic data cannot validate real violations, (3) information leakage unquantified" - Final: "Operational tooling requiring substantial validation before high-stakes deployment" 7. CONCLUSIONS COMPLETELY REWRITTEN (Section 6): Before: "First diagnostic framework", "explicit safeguards prevent overconfidence", "complete privacy" After: "Proposes framework", "heuristic safeguards (not validated)", "partial privacy" Honest assessment paragraph: - "Contribution = systematizing existing diagnostics into federated workflow" - "NOT developing novel diagnostic theory or proving formal guarantees" - "Provides heuristic guidance, requires substantial validation" - "Cannot deploy in high-stakes clinical/regulatory contexts without validation" 8. CRITICAL VALIDATION NEEDS EXPLICIT: Future work must: - Controlled simulation with known violations (bias factors 1.5, 2.0, 3.0) - Assess diagnostic sensitivity/specificity - Calibrate thresholds to achieve desired performance - Quantify false positive/negative rates - Measure information leakage rigorously - Validate on real multi-site data (not just Synthea) Changes prioritize academic honesty over claims: - No "validated safeguards" where validation is absent - No "0% privacy" where information leakage exists - No "formal thresholds" where heuristics exist - Honest about synthetic data limitations (cannot validate real violations) - Honest about contribution scope (operational tooling, not theory)
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