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 Privacy-oriented GTK 4 / Libadwaita client written in Rust.
 
-The term _Privacy-oriented_ means that Yoda complies to the [Gemini protocol specification](https://geminiprotocol.net/docs/protocol-specification.gmi) and excludes third-party connections, that making it safe to use in combination with I2P. The Yoda browser also includes useful tools, such as flexible proxy configuration, out of the box for use with mesh networks like Yggdrasil, Mycelium, CJDNS, and others. Additionally, it prevents auto-follow redirection to external resources by default, which is not clearly specified at this time.
+The term _Privacy-oriented_ means that Yoda complies to the [Gemini protocol specification](https://geminiprotocol.net/docs/protocol-specification.gmi) and excludes third-party connections, that making it safe to use in combination with I2P. The Yoda browser also includes useful tools, such as flexible proxy configuration, out of the box for use with mesh networks like Yggdrasil, Mycelium, CJDNS, and others. Additionally, it prevents auto-follow external redirection by default and requires manual confirmation, which is currently not clearly specified.
 
-Yoda browser is primarily designed by and for experienced network users who care about their network fingerprints and prefer to control every action manually. It does not run background connections, does not incorporate web-like media preloading without user initiation (unlike some clients), nor does it automatically check for updates from unexpected network-related servers.
+Yoda browser is primarily designed by and for experienced network users who care about their network fingerprints and prefer to control every action manually. It does not run background connections, does not incorporate web-like media preloading without user initiation (unlike some other clients), nor does it automatically check for updates from unexpected network-related servers.
 
 The Gemini protocol was designed as a simple, private alternative to the Web, and Yoda follows this philosophy by providing a graphical user interface (GUI) for seamless navigation in Geminispace, partially inspired by the Firefox UI.